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Angst vs. Fluff

  • Feb. 9th, 2009 at 8:19 PM
Misc - First drafts
I have another question for you guys.

As you all have undoubtedly noticed, I like to use RBTL to experiment. I like to mix up my styles and tones and POVs. I like writing angst and fluff and family stuff and character studies and dialogue and no dialogue. Since the beginning, through 32 chapters and over 1000 reviews (I can't quite believe it), there is one thing that always makes me laugh.

Whenever I post angst, I get like fifteen reviews or PMs asking for fluff. And when I post fluff, I get feedback asking when I'm going to post angst. I can't really change the tone of what I post. When I'm feeling the angst, I write angst and when I'm feeling the fluff, I write fluff.

I don't really find Alice and Jasper to be a very cutesy couple and when I write fluff, I try to still maintain my characterizations and character development. I've read a lot of really stupid fluff is my point, so I may shy away from it a bit more as I don't want to cross that line. I don't really have a preference on what I like to read. As long as it's well-written, I can deal with pretty much any kind of fic.

So my question for you is...angst or fluff? Do you even have a preference or does it depend on your mood or the pairing or the author?

Bonus question: Why, when I post an angst chapter do people forget that the previous one was (often) fluff and vice versa?

:)

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[info]apri wrote:
Feb. 10th, 2009 03:29 am (UTC)
You can never please everyone all of the time. lol. So, with me, it all depends on the author. If it's well written and true to character, then I can read either or. I like a mix, when it's not all fluff or not all angst because no relationship is all one or the other.
[info]brynna82 wrote:
Feb. 10th, 2009 12:04 pm (UTC)
You are right...no relationships are one or the other. I've read authors notes where they say "I don't do angst" or "I don't do fluff." And I always think that has to be so confining. As much as I find fluff to be a bit more of a struggle to write, it's always really fun. I'd go crazy with just angst I think.

Edited at 2009-02-10 12:05 pm (UTC)
[info]laloveskt wrote:
Feb. 10th, 2009 05:27 am (UTC)
I think it really depends on the author. A good writer can completely change my mood. Certain pairings are good, Kara and Lee tend to be ansty, but I find even the angsty Alice and Jasper to be laced with hope:)
[info]brynna82 wrote:
Feb. 10th, 2009 12:07 pm (UTC)
Oh man, Kara and Lee are angsty but that's largely due to the fact that there is almost nothing fluffy about BSG. Even the fluff I have read in that fandom tends to be laced with a certain despair and...grittiness. What a good show though.
(Anonymous) wrote:
Feb. 10th, 2009 05:38 am (UTC)
i think you have to write what you're feeling, otherwise whatever you're working on wont turn out how you wanted it to. you write amazing angst and fluff... and they're both jasper/alice appropriate...meaning totally in-character.
preference? depends on my mood and how well the author writes them. in your case, i'll read whatever you decide to post next. fluff...angst...character study...etc. i think the diversity of RBTL is yet another aspect that makes it such a good fic! =) just keep doing what you're doing...there are some people who'll ask you for opposite of what you just wrote, but then there are the others who appreciate whatever you're going to offer out for reading. write for them and write for yourself. =)
-Lucy
[info]brynna82 wrote:
Feb. 10th, 2009 12:14 pm (UTC)
Lucy! I can finally respond to you directly...haha.

Yeah, I'm not complaining about the people who ask for something else, I just think it's a funny trend. I try to keep it reasonably balanced and honestly...angst or fluff, the review count is usually the same. I just think it's interesting that some readers tend to vehemently prefer one over the other. When I posted chapter 31...the one where they were laying in bed playing the game...crap...Oh, This Years Love (stupid song titles...lol), I got more than a couple reviews that said something like, "I have read the whole story and this is the first I had to review because it was so cute!" Just weird to me since I've never had a preference.

And thanks for the kind words. I'm glad you like the variety. :)
(Anonymous) wrote:
Feb. 10th, 2009 05:29 pm (UTC)
yes! its me! haha. i gave up on trying to figure out livejournal a while ago, so i dont have one, and then i have a fanfiction username...but im too lazy to sign in. so the 'anonymous' review option is working out okay for me! =)

i think its VERY interesting that some people didnt review until chapter 31! 31 was adorable...it was a 'feel-good' read... but there are 30 chapters before it that include a few feel-goods also...hmm. something to ponder i guess.

i know what you mean about the no preference thing. you said somewhere that you're more about good writing rather than the genre of it...im right there with you!

and no problem. thanks for the amazing writing![i feel like i over-use 'amazing' & 'awesome' when writing to you haha]

have a good day brynna =)
-lucy
[info]pookykums wrote:
Feb. 10th, 2009 05:39 pm (UTC)
The best I think is Flangst (haha). A little bit of angst and fluff here and there. Which is exactly what you do.

And your kind of fluff is not uber-cheesy or cliché fluff. Your fluff is the kind of fluff that melts your heart and makes you feel all warm inside. Which is the best kind.

Also you have kind of mastered the art of writing angst too. The angsty emotions you write is so complex and yet still oh-so heart wrenching and you can get while reading, what the character feels like (I'm mostly talking about the way you write Jasper here).

So yeah, again, the best kind of fics is, in my mind, stories that mix both of angst and fluff. Flangst. xD
[info]brynna82 wrote:
Feb. 14th, 2009 03:44 am (UTC)
Hehe, flangst. Good word!

Glad my brand of fluff works for you. I tend to like writing angst more because I can get into the more complex emotions but fluff can be fun too.

Flangst...I'm going to remember that. :)
[info]rosegilmore wrote:
Feb. 11th, 2009 05:27 am (UTC)
(How did I not realize you posted this? Anyway, commenting now).

Question one: People are 1. impatient. And that's why when you write Fluff we want Angst and when you write Fluff we want Angst. Maybe us (readers) just don't want you to do 100% fluff and so we remind you to write Angst?
Personally, as long as it's well written, in character, and not angst or fluff all the time I'm happy! (I've also really liked the 'younger' chapters. Before they join the Cullens).

Question two: oops. I think I answered both in answer for question one.

Before I let you go I hope you don't change anything!! I love everything that you write, and the recent fluff has been sooo fun and the angst has been beautiful! The balance is great, but you are leaning towards the angst side. ...I think.
[info]brynna82 wrote:
Feb. 14th, 2009 03:52 am (UTC)
Actually, it's pretty well balanced. It kind of depends where you put the chapters that are a conglomeration of angst and fluff (flangst as pookykums called it) but the straight fluff/straight angst ratio is pretty close.

Your icon is awesome, btw. :)
[info]rosegilmore wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2009 09:31 pm (UTC)
LOLZ, i love the word flangst! It's soo perfect! You really do have a good balance of angst, fluff and flangst!

Aww, thanks! It's a quote from an online parody of Prince Caspian.
[info]brynna82 wrote:
Feb. 17th, 2009 12:59 am (UTC)
We all have to give Pookykums credit when the word flangst takes fanfiction by storm. :)

I must see this parody. Do you have a link?
[info]rosegilmore wrote:
Feb. 18th, 2009 09:11 pm (UTC)
Yes, all credit goes to [info]pookykums.

Okay, the icon is from this batch. And the parody thread is Here
[info]jacksper wrote:
Feb. 17th, 2009 12:14 am (UTC)
I've been an avid reader of your fic - I totally suck at reviewing though.. which I'm trying to change. I'm thinking of going back and reviewing every chapter because you deserve amazing feedback.. and I'm just always at a loss for something intelligent to say. I have to say though that I'm a fan of fluff. I'm generally a sad/depressing person so I like to read things that are going to put me in a good mood. Not like overly cheesy, gives me a toothache it's so sweet kind of fluff. Just simple adoration and love. I agree that Jasper and Alice aren't cutesy, and I think their story and love transcends way beyond the cutesy, cheesetastic crap fic that I've read as of late.

The perfect example of what I like is one of your recent chapters, 31 I think? The one titled This Years Love, which I remember because that's my favorite David Gray song. But anyway! That was absolutely perfect, and wasn't overly done. I think you have a perfect balance of fluff and angst, or "flangst" as someone said above me. Sorry this is so long winded.. I just wanted to put in my two cents. :) I do love your writing and you tend to pick my favorite songs for chapter titles, which is always a plus.
[info]brynna82 wrote:
Feb. 17th, 2009 01:07 am (UTC)
Aw, thanks. I'm so glad that you have been enjoying it. I understand about reviewing. I struggle with what to say to authors too.

Part of why I started writing Alice and Jasper and especially the more nuanced, darker Alice and Jasper was because of the huge amount of OOC fluff at the time. You are right, some of it is unforgivably cheesy. I have a couple of fluff chapters planned in a row here after the darkness that was chapter 34 so hopefully you fluff fans will enjoy it.

And I'm glad that you liked chapter 31. That was a fun one to write. Actually every chapter title is a song. I just like kind of obscure music so it might not be immediately obvious. :)
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